One minute Puberty

[Elodie]

=)

[Paul Fierlinger]

This is a very good idea but I don't think it works as well as the theme deserves. I was bored before the minute was over; call it the "Longest Minute of Puberty". First, I miss colors; secondly. better music, and thirdly but most importantly: a better design concept.

The animation is way too exaggerated; it feels like being told, (no, shouted at) three times to make sure I get it. It's juvenile animation and there would be nothing wrong with that considering the subject matter, but in that case it's a story in progress and the best stories are told only after the real life story has come to a conclusion and the author can retell it with hindsight. And that is what's missing here the most.

[Fabrice]

The animation is way too exaggerated; it feels like being told, (no, shouted at) three times to make sure I get it. It's juvenile animation and there would be nothing wrong with that considering the subject matter, but in that case it's a story in progress and the best stories are told only after the real life story has come to a conclusion and the author can retell it with hindsight. And that is what's missing here the most.

But, it's maybe wanted. I wonder how old is the animator.