Tantalus wrote:indeed... you still have some minor problems with the proportions, but i really like how you did this one.
Beautifull, keep it up!
I blame all of my proportional problems on my slipshod rough sketches. Soon, I realized that "rough sketch" is a terrible and misleading name for the beginning stage of a drawing. I misinterpreted the meaning of "rough sketch", feeling that the words "rough" and "sketch" carry connotations of careless and hastily-drawn stuff that you get done as soon as possible so that you can get on to the real work of rendering and nice line work.
To me, a rough drawing should consist of an accurate diagram or layout of the elements of your drawing. It's only rough in the sense that no effort or attention is paid towards making sure the lines are clean and nice and that there are no attempts to render the drawing beyond simple shadows. It is every bit as difficult to produce a rough sketch that gives off the sense that everything is in the right place as it is difficult to bring that rough sketch to a finished image where it actually seems as if light is reflecting and casting shadows and interacting with the damn thing!
The gruntwork of rendering mostly lies in making sure you create the right transitions of the right shape in the right place. The rough sketch should indicate the correct shape and place of the transitions or your transitions, no matter how nicely shaded, will be in the wrong place and it'll all go to hell in a dainty wicker handbasket filled with steel wool and rotten eggs and a pretty pink ribbon tied around the handle.
The burnt hand teaches best!